Complex Apartments
4th November 2007
carpet under my feet
dulls the slap of a hard world –
caveman cries below
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carpet under my feet
dulls the slap of a hard world –
caveman cries below
Filed under Poetry, Senryu | Comments (4)
Thank you for blogrolling me
Love the design of your site, and the words.
Fiona
You’re welcome. Thanks for your kind words.
Wit and humor blends well in this senryu. I’ve lived in apartments and neighbors have grated on my patience as well. The ‘caveman’ reference still makes me chuckle. Haha. Fitting.
Thank you. Yes, the cave might be nicer and smell better (some of them anyway) but we aren’t far removed from are hirsute cousins once we’re home.